First Draft:
The feedback we got from our first draft of our film opening was better than expected. Most of the feedback was about the voice over and how it wasn't very clear and that there was a lot of stutters. People also said that it was very fast so we have now improved this by re filming it with a different person to get a clear voice over. Before we let everyone see the film opening we knew that the voice over wasn't great but we didn't have time to re film so we were glad this was our feedback and we agreed with it completely. Some people also said that some of the shots of the setting was unclear and a bit blurry, we also noticed this and will take it into account for our second draft. We also got feedback about the titles because we hadn't finished them and because they were a bit big so we needed to make them smaller. However we did get a lot of good feedback which really helped us focus on what we could improve. Most people said that the genre was clear and that the speed of the shots were good as it created more tension. The setting was a good place to film because it was a normal day in normal time and was very realistic. Many people liked the use of dogs because it was different and they made the opening a lot better.
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